Thursday, October 25, 2007
Oreo
I would feel as if she was the only one I could talk to no-one if I do they don't talk back. I don't want to go to school. You know that mama's going to make me go back in the morrning. I guess, I will have to pretend to be someone I' not. I don't fit in, well Oreo I'll tell you the rest in the morrning before I go to school, I love you see you in the morrning. Well, there is two girls named Summer and Kate that think that they are all that, but they aren't. Well, I will tell mama in the morrning. The two girls called me ugly and they got a rumor going around saying that I wear the same paints everyday that is a lie. Meow, Meow. Well, I have to go to sleep because here comes mama. Night, Love you see you in the morrning. Meow, Meow.
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This is my favorite line: "I don't want to go to school. You know that mama's going to make me go back in the morrning." Such voice! It rings true.
I love how you explanded your poem into this monologue. Don't forget to use conventions even on the blog. Put the cat's meow's in parenthesis and maybe set up the scene so the reader knows this is a monologue.
I like your monologue. I love that your talking to your cat! It's so real. I like the You know mama's GOING to make me go back in the morning. It's my favorite part. I enjoyed your poem.
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