Camp Buck Horn
I sat in the corner of my cabin,
My rocking chair squeaking back and forth.
I stared out the window at the mountain tops,
watching the water on the lake freeze,
and the people laugh and fellowship with one another.
I heard bugs buzzing, leaves crunching as people pass
and the tree tops blowing in the wind.
I slowly got up.
I opened the door and headed towards the smell of bacon, eggs, biscuits, and grits.
Lake water and peach body wash wafted from the hot muggy showers.
By: Kelbie Bowman
3 comments:
I like this and wen did you go there
I love the imagery! I wonder what you are thinking in the woods. I love the feeling of the promise of a new chilly day.
I love the word choice. This is a great poem. Maybe you could use the sounds like onomatopoeia. For example you could say the words "buzz , buzz, buzz the bugs went and I heard"
Instead of I heard bugs buzzing.
That's just my suggestion.
I like your poem either way!
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