Abecedarian Muse: Our Love

Friday, December 7, 2007

Our love seems to never go forward,

We try but it's always back to the fighting.

Our love seems hopeless but endless.

Our love is like a video stuck in rewind never fast ford.

Our love just seems

fatal...

but

endless.

kelbie_danielle said...: Love the paradox! ISn't love confusing? You capture that confuusion masterfuly.

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Why butendless nospaces?; December 7, 2007 at 8:00 AM
Katie Duckett said...: I love it this! :) My favorite line is, "Our love is like a video stuck in rewind" :); December 10, 2007 at 7:46 PM